i should blend in the abstract render more it is now just he background and abstract render
suggestions to do that: -make it the same contrast -make it the same sharpness -make it same quallity
quallity of the texture isn't good everywhere it is important to have some good quality texture stocks with this style maybe make the lightsource bigger (not stonger but bigger) now it got a little hard edge what looks bad imo
text could have been placed in the let corner bellow work on your focal point it is on my abstract render and it should be on the girls face it think
I know art can be interpreted in many different ways depending on what the viewer sees through their eyes. For me the abstract design resembles a cross. For most people its a symbol of guidance and spirituality, for others its a symbol of pain that religious beliefs can bring to society hence the floating shreiking head.
Man that lighting is stunning! Having that said I think the face could cast some direct shadow as well. I am really taken by the whole atmosphere. I think specially the contrast of the sharp textures vs. the fading blurred spots is creating a great touch of space. Very disturbing and well executed concept. Bravo!
it is now just he background and abstract render
suggestions to do that:
-make it the same contrast
-make it the same sharpness
-make it same quallity
quallity of the texture isn't good everywhere
it is important to have some good quality texture stocks with this style
maybe make the lightsource bigger (not stonger but bigger)
now it got a little hard edge what looks bad imo
text could have been placed in the let corner bellow
work on your focal point it is on my abstract render and it should be on the girls face it think
i hope you can do something with it
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